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Journal Doll For My Dad by laneboi

Lmao I suck at critiques but oh well. XD

Vision- This is very nice, yus very nice :o But the front legs are too straight. If your legs were completely straight, how would you move? There would be no joints connecting the bone together. The eyes should have colour, not just the colour of the fur and the pelt is too fluffy. It's more boney there so it should be a bit flatter. Yusfluffytailissexybtw
Originality- Pretty original, I guess, but there are still a lot of poses like this. The design is very original, I do have to say though :D
Technique- This technique is very appealing, though I still do say you could have made the lines dividing the colour a bit neater.
Impact- Blahbahblahgood.
:> The end. Merry Halloween.
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